Comments : I Just Realized it Today

  • 6 months ago

    by Star

    No you’re not >_< there nothing wrong with being see through.
    What a metaphor Luce, captured the feeling very well!!

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    Luce, loved this! Wow! I'm just absorbing this. You are much more than this grocery cart you compare yourself to.

  • 6 months ago

    by Walter

    Love the imagery you create here! Had me coming back to read this. Well done!

  • 6 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hi. *offers a polite wave*

    I like the uniqueness of your poems and this is no exception. A vessel that can carry things in. Not a box, rather a cage, trapping most, but not all. Those bits that fall through the holes are interesting. Did they escape or were they freed?

    The line "I carry everything that I can possibly can" is curious to me. It may be a typo, but knowing you, it could also be meant?
    Either way, it's always nice to read you.

    We live near a supermarket. We also live near a creek. It's a constant frustration that some people think its okay to push ones trolley into the creek, which is a haven for wildlife. I see too many of them discarded this way. Maybe that's how they will end up, upside down in a muddy creek? Lol

    X

    • 6 months ago

      by Everlasting

      “May that’s how they will end up, upside down in a muddy creek?”

      ^ ouch!

      Oh yeah I meant it... hehe English is not my native Lagrange so sometimes I go by what sounds right to me.

  • 5 months ago

    by Lemon Squeezy

    This is super clever and such deep meaning behind it. Absolutely great! Just a wonderfully intriguing poem.