Comments : napowrimo: never enough (day 8)

  • 3 years ago

    by Sunshine

    OMG no that's not inspired by that poem not even partly. You make my heart ache. This is very touching and yet the wording is just at another level.

  • 3 years ago

    by Star

    Day 8 and your poems keep getting stronger!!!

  • 3 years ago

    by Adastra

    Hey, nice! I love reading this, phenomenal work as always. Although this might've been unintended, your poems form a sort of loose narrative that I absolutely adore, and like Star said, eight days in and they just keep on getting better. I hope you have a good day. ^^

  • 3 years ago

    by M. Rene'

    Transposed Roses:

    The river keeps flowing
    with hardly any memory at all
    of the days I wore ruts into
    its clay stained shores.

    You probably don't flinch
    at the mention of my name
    even though our circles
    still intersect frequently.

    And I kept nothing of you
    through the moves. Nothing
    at all because, well, how could I?
    Yet, I wish he were you -

    truly as much as I love him
    I miss our patterns and
    the way the river healed us
    from separate things - together.

    -M. Rene'

    Okay with that out of my system, I love this. It's a fantastic piece that brought me some much appreciated tears. Now, off to read Rania's piece!