Comments : napowrimo 13 - Haiku

  • 4 years ago

    by prasanna

    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    you're absolutely killing it with napowrimo!

    • 4 years ago

      by Sunshine

      right you Neruda <3

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lovely, Rania, truly. Nominated.

    • 4 years ago

      by Sunshine

      Thank you. I'm flattered <3

  • 3 years ago

    by Violet Raven

    This is my favorite I've read from you so far. This is lighthearted with it's outter appearance but i feel like there is a twinge of sadness here as well.

    When i first started reading this i got a sense of a story that is fresh and new so perhaps a new friendship, relationship something like that where everything is happiness. I really liked the word sensory here as it pertains to different emotions all at once which will happen with something new and exciting.

    There is not a lot to say. Everything is deep so it is difficult to explain unless you are feeling that emotion as well.

    Sometimes things change as fast as the seasons do. It almost feels like a summer fling where everything is sunshine and roses but when winter comes everything is cold and wilted.

    I really enjoyed the story overall here. Because you as the author show us readers that each person is full of different emotions.