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I CALL DIBS ON NOMINATING THIS NEXT WEEK

This is incredibly written Rania! How much your poetry has evolved and flourished over the years! The language is stark, strong and emotive. It's written with so much confidence too.

My only 'advice' would be the strength of your line beginnings and endings. This is a personal thing, in which I really prefer the lines of a poem to bleed into each other seamlessly. This is much more effective when you begin lines with strong adjectives, verbs, focal points. Starting lines with prepositions and filler words often takes away the urgency.

Having said that, I look forward to seeing this in the nominations page when Hiraeth gets round to it. :)

how come i can't nominate this D: