Comments : the gallows

  • 7 months ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Wow. This is on another level Mark. Splendid writing! It's very touching. I can't grasp the real scenario behind it but many lines resonated with me with my own analysis and really touched my heart or in better words stirred some unpleasant memories about some hurtful people whom I've had in my life.

    The wording is so sharp and just deeeeep. I am blown away.

  • 6 months ago

    by Everlasting

    Weird. Someone came to mind after reading this eight times. Needless to say, your words caught me.

  • 6 months ago

    by Star

    This is such a personal piece, and I could tell it is connected two of your poems.
    And I agree with Rania, this is on another level. Your word choice is really impactful, the first this I sat staring at the screen, speechless. I didnt know how to comment. I cant imagine the memory that created this.
    Your poetry lately is really powerful!!!