Wow. This is on another level Mark. Splendid writing! It's very touching. I can't grasp the real scenario behind it but many..like many lines resonated with me with my own analysis and really touched my heart or in better words stirred some unpleasant memories about some hurtful people whom I've had in my life.
The wording is so sharp and just deeeeep. I am blown away.
This is such a personal piece, and I could tell it is connected two of your poems.
And I agree with Rania, this is on another level. Your word choice is really impactful, the first this I sat staring at the screen, speechless. I didnt know how to comment. I cant imagine the memory that created this.
Your poetry lately is really powerful!!!