Comments : ripples across the ocean.
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5 years ago
by Star
Oooh wow !!
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5 years ago
Simply gorgeous. I love the way the sea permeates each part and especially love the line 'the lungs
fill with air that is very much salted with you.' Very clever. -
5 years ago
by Everlasting
I like it
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5 years ago
by Gracy Judith
Beautifully penned! I loved it!
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5 years ago
by Gracy Judith
Beautifully penned! I loved it!
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5 years ago
What a nice piece of writing.
