Comments : A city on its knees.

  • 6 months ago

    by Rania Moallem

    omg MA...goosebumps everywhere. What a powerful poem. I was mainly taken away with how strong your tone is knowing how affected you actually are by all this. It's so overwhelming.

    Silence pollutes the rivers
    we were once defined by,
    ! these 2 lines were like the peak and then your closing words were just killers. The poem flowed so well from the bottom of your heart and touched mine!!

  • 6 months ago

    by Shoreditchpoet Dennis

    You really capture the sense of exasperation of our times. We all need a different direction don’t we?
    Great piece.