Comments : Aftermath

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Sorry having issues with mouse keeps duplicatiing

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Vivid imagery that portrays very well the evils of conflict in the home. Its steeped in bitterness and depicts all that is bad in a relationship gone wrong. An excellent write. Milly x

  • 2 months ago

    by Gracy Judith

    A very well-written piece depicting differences between two lovers and how bitterness lingers and hurt does not heal. I love the use of the word skulk here...works very well. Cheers...

    • 2 months ago

      by Daniel

      Thanks for your kind words Milly, Gracy. :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Rania Moallem

    The details! the details..sweet-god..the semicolon, how I appreciate the way this piece ended. So much emotions...I can feel every single line. I even read this in my head in such a slam-poetry tone because of its intensity. One of my favorites.

    • 1 month ago

      by Daniel

      Thank you kindly, Rania. :)