Comments : The Creature

  • 3 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Superb. A nicely told monster tale with great rhyming. Very enjoyable and leaves just enough to the imagination.

    (small typo you might want to change stanza 2 line 3 should be through not threw) Milly x

  • 3 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This is excellent and could be interpreted in many ways.
    It feels to me like a good old fashioned witch hunt ... society calling anyone who doesn't conform to their ideology 'a monster' while all the 'monsters' are thinking the exact same thing about the conformist society. There's an element of this 'reflection' with the water theme. You don't fear the monster, because you ARE the monster, already under society's microscope.
    This could relate to very many things going on in the world right now and I think it's an excellently written and very savvy poem. Really well done and nominated :-) x
    =^.^=