Comments : A semi-happy poem.

  • 2 months ago

    by Star

    Although there is a hint of sadness behind this, it is sooooooooo inspiring!!!!!!!

  • 2 months ago

    by Everlasting

    I love these lines:

    “we chose to break routine
    and linger on the heavens,”

    It reminds of my childhood when I used to sway in my hamaca while gazing at the sky. Whenever I used to see a door in the clouds, I thought those were the doors to heaven. It was fascinating. I miss those times. Thanks for taking me back to my childhood.

    • 2 months ago

      by Poet on the Piano

      That is beautiful, Luce, thank YOU for sharing that :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    there's always something about your pieces.. you just feel them.