Comments : The tempo of death.

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Gracy Judith

    This is such an emotive piece! It's a shame how discriminatory and prejudiced the world is...epecially, when it comes to people of colour and you've captured it all in this piece.

    ... cop is charged with the
    bullets he missed instead of
    the bullets he hit.


    Murder is an acceptable warm-up,
    an expected part of daily rehearsal,
    where no one dares question the
    necessity of weapons and excessive
    force when they lead to a cacophony
    most people can't resist.

    Brilliant write MA!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by hiraeth

    With each day passing, starting anew from fire sounds swell. Well put.