Comments : Vague Vision

  • 5 years ago

    by prasanna

    !!!

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      ???

  • 5 years ago

    by Lost star

    Wonderfully written! I love the expression within the word choices here. Wonderful.

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you ^_^

  • 5 years ago

    by Sunshine

    You know how I'm so into micro poetry! This is svery delicate and the word choice felt so natural. I like how the content itself felt vague for me in connotation with your title.

    The last few phrases were so powerful! shattering / delicately..the twist was deep.

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Even if I didnt know it’s obvious :p you write a lot of short poems!!!

      Thank you <3