Comments : Sink or swim (Rondeau)

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is well written and with a good message too! Liked it!

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Meena :)

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello, Michael. It's so nice to read rondeau form. You do have a talent for them and these lines stood out for me:

    It matters not, our coloured skin
    what matters most, is love within.
    We must unite, and halt divide
    ^
    When everyone can unlock and share their inner love, we will be free.

    Take care.

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thanks fella :)

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Everlasting

    Very well done. This Rondeau was a pleasure to read. Not only does it read smooth but it comes with a great message. I adore these lines:

    “It matters not, our coloured skin.
    what matters most, is love within.
    We must unite, and halt divide”

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Everlasting:)

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Emi

    I've missed your work glad to see this nominated and see you around *smiles and waves*

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Hey Emi, thank you :)x