This is a truly marvellous piece of work. No, this is art and I have decided that it is fully deserving of my last nomination! Wonderful, Cassie.

All the best as ever,
Ben

Absolutely beautiful poem. I loved it, especially the last stanza!

I agree this is really beautiful!

Very well penned Cassie really enjoyed reading your piece. Some beautiful language used, bringing a vivid picture
M :)

Love the images in this!

Over thyme her flaws revealed
but lesson never learned
So to traverse this acre green
Everlasting must return.

^^ Uhmm, I don’t mean to sound pretentious, really, I do not mean that at all. But, awww... should I return?

May i ask, what did you mean by that last stanza? “Who is Everlasting?” Throughout the point there’s references of flowers and their names capitalize. I thought it was interesting that the last stanza “Everlasting is capitalize” but I’m don’t think that’s a flower.

Haha never mind my Last comment. Everlasting it is a flower of the Daisy family.

Congratulations cassie :) M

The images it puts in my mind are so beautiful. Congratulations on the win!