Comments : The Garden Ghost

  • 1 month ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is a truly marvellous piece of work. No, this is art and I have decided that it is fully deserving of my last nomination! Wonderful, Cassie.

    All the best as ever,
    Ben

  • 1 month ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Absolutely beautiful poem. I loved it, especially the last stanza!

    • 1 month ago

      by cassie hughes

      Thank you so much for the lovely comments Keira

  • 1 month ago

    by Star

    I agree this is really beautiful!

  • 1 month ago

    by Michael

    Very well penned Cassie really enjoyed reading your piece. Some beautiful language used, bringing a vivid picture
    M :)

    • 1 month ago

      by cassie hughes

      Thanks Michael. never had my name spelled that way before though ;)

  • 1 month ago

    by Lost star

    Love the images in this!

  • 1 month ago

    by Everlasting

    Over thyme her flaws revealed
    but lesson never learned
    So to traverse this acre green
    Everlasting must return.

    ^^ Uhmm, I don’t mean to sound pretentious, really, I do not mean that at all. But, awww... should I return?

  • 1 month ago

    by Everlasting

    May i ask, what did you mean by that last stanza? “Who is Everlasting?” Throughout the point there’s references of flowers and their names capitalize. I thought it was interesting that the last stanza “Everlasting is capitalize” but I’m don’t think that’s a flower.

  • 1 month ago

    by Everlasting

    Haha never mind my Last comment. Everlasting it is a flower of the Daisy family.

    • 1 month ago

      by cassie hughes

      It is indeed a Daisy type flower. Sorry for the confusion :D

  • 1 month ago

    by Michael

    Congratulations cassie :) M

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Shruti

    The images it puts in my mind are so beautiful. Congratulations on the win!