Comments : Unknown

  • 1 year ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Wonderful alliteration and fitting for this time of year!

    Keira

  • 1 year ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Alliteration is always a treat, so well done! I took this kind of a Scrooge-type character, but for Halloween. Or someone who just doesn't find the appeal or fun in spooking others, which is fair if they don't want to be frightened. And then I read the pumpkin part as human wanting the perfect thing, decoration, costume etc, and they get so wrapped up in this idea, and it's something the ogre doesn't understand. Or perhaps the ogre is a metaphor for someone who has been treated poorly, not treated as human, so of course he holds resentment.

    Love the creativity, Em!

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I love this, Em. I truly believe it is one of your most creative and technically well executed pieces to date. I hope someone nominates as I am all out!

    Take care and well done.

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Unknown is a great title Em, nice to see a piece from you with a ghoulish theme.
    An 'outrageous ogre' certainly leaves an image in the mind! I feel humanity has feels the strength of your poem, so take note humans!
    Enjoyed reading this. M :)x

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Thank you so much everyone. It's great to be back and 'let off steam' as us British like to say :) I hope you're all staying safe x

  • 1 year ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Us word-smiths, like similar sounds don't we? Alliteration is fun and brings a nice quality to this near pumpkin shaped poem. X

  • 1 year ago

    by Walter

    A magical write...I enjoyed this!

    • 1 year ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Fully deserved, Em. This is wonderful.

  • 1 year ago

    by cassie hughes

    A great piece. I love the alliteration and creativity. Well done

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Nice one Em, well done :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations Em! This is awesome!

  • 1 year ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Well done, Em. It's always nice to be on the front page. X

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Thank you all so much. I'm so shocked x

  • 1 year ago

    by Shruti

    That's quite the image, I love everything that reminds me of Halloween!
    One question - in the last line, could you be referring to global warming? I'm sorry if it meant something completely different, that's just the first thing that came to my mind.
    Enjoyed reading this, congratulations on the win! ^^

  • 1 year ago

    by Jack

    Great poem!