Comments : through my binoculars. . .

  • 3 years ago

    by Everlasting

    I enjoyed the repetition of avocets. I had to look that words up and found they were birds. Though the poem gives that away lol. I just had to make sure.
    Well done with the rhymes. The poem was smooth and a delight to read.

  • 3 years ago

    by Michael

    Beautifully done Mr D. They are incredible birds :)

  • 3 years ago

    by prasanna

    Wasn't aware of avocets until now, beautiful birds. Loved the repetition, and you certainly did them justice. Glad to see this nominated!

  • 3 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    there is a song "The ants go marching two by two harah harah"- I read this poem to the tune of that song :-)

    I love your poetry Michael, I always get a good vibe from it- this was a delight to read :-)

    • 3 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      aww, thanks. Claire and I were waiting for them to fly into the bay and the first line came to me. Thanks for reading - it means a lot to me x