There's subtle rhyming throughout this, and it's very powerful. Nice :)

Like Kiera said, I too love the subtle rhymes! A short poem but speaks a lot of pain.

The subtle rhyming is sublime, a powerful piece.

The act of writing on a napkin is the intriguing part for me. Feeling worthless, not even deserving of a piece of paper, not even a scrap. A napkin used to wipe off/up/ away

Nice work.

A piece which says it all and rhymes tucked in without notice. Nicely penned, a read very much felt.