Comments : White supremacy.

  • 3 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    It was disgusting that people got away with so much just because they're white - the news this morning was horrible to see.
    This is an amazingly powerful write, well rhymed and has such a strong message.
    The last stanza is incredible - It is so full of truth, emotion and rage that it really moved me!
    I couldn't agree with your poem more. These are terrible times, but I'm sure that it will get better :)
    Thank you so much for sharing, I loved this.

  • 3 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    It was disgusting that people got away with so much just because they're white - the news this morning was horrible to see.
    This is an amazingly powerful write, well rhymed and has such a strong message.
    The last stanza is incredible - It is so full of truth, emotion and rage that it really moved me!
    I couldn't agree with your poem more. These are terrible times, but I'm sure that it will get better :)
    Thank you so much for sharing, I loved this.

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I agree with this entirely. There really is no use pretending otherwise. That is all.

  • 3 years ago

    by Kate

    This is beautifully written.

    You can feel the hurt and ache behind the words, one that can be felt by people of all races. Those who are white and do not use their privileges to stand up against the oppressors, the KKK, the people that believe the color of someone’s skin makes them less than they are part of the problem. It is not a “their” problem, it is an “us” problem and I think that is so widely overlooked.

    Well done!

  • 3 years ago

    by yogi73

    Well put and sad but true