Comments : to the one who wishes to purge themselves of past-ghosts,

  • 9 months ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    your words are like Manuka honey drizzling over my primed consciousness

  • 9 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This LITERALLY took my breath away! Especially "teach me what blood means" - oh my word! The opening image was so intense, and I found the wrath and unleashed fury and passion in this. Then, it's softened. But still alive. The "quiet rebellion" of love. I thought of you wanting that control in your life, them being the meaning behind it all, and you, following in their wake. I also took it as them not necessarily seeing you as weak or their "prey" so to speak, but genuinely adoring being in that center light. You see them in everything and revere them, and they can't help but relish in it.

    Such a provoking piece!

    • 9 months ago

      by hiraeth

      Thank you both!