Comments : Shrouded Vengeance (Amphion)

  • 4 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Nice work Cassie. This poem depicts this image so well. As for the form, i liked it! Might i suggest a footnote, explaining the poetry form?

    • 4 years ago

      by cassie hughes

      Thanks so much Mr Darcy.
      I have added the footnote as you suggested too :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Really clever work, Cassie.

  • 4 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Nice form. Never heard of it before.
    Might give it a try.
    Your poem does fit the image really well.
    Thanks for sharing.

  • 4 years ago

    by Jack

    This makes me think. I like it!