Comments : Day 20

  • 3 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Sounds good to me!

  • 3 years ago

    by BOB GALLO

    This piece is cruelty to those who are in diet

    • 3 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Well, there’s some people whose diet consist of whatever they want to eat... so to them it’s not a cruelty. But I see what you mean. Thank you for commenting

  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    oh no! I think i have ruined my keyboard with my excessive salivation. Nice couple of tasty stanzas. :)