Comments : CURRICULUM 'VITAE

  • 1 month ago

    by BOB GALLO

    Old wound, fresh bleeding.
    Nicely and clearly penned.

    • 1 month ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Dips ones head in respect

      Thank you

    • 1 month ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Yes an old wound and in some ways a new bleed. The purpose of this poem is perhaps lost on many as so many are just starting out in life.

      I have put your comment up for praise for nothing other than your understanding.

      sometimes the simplest words are the most important. This is a thing lost on many. Words are power, I just wish I had better control of mine.

  • 1 month ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is great, Craig. Nominated.

    • 1 month ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Cheers Ben

      This was a bit of a bugger to write. You know me and know that when I have an idea the poem pretty much writes itself.

      This one was not like that and it's taken ages to get it to convey what I wanted. I've deleted bits then put them back added new bits then removed them a few days later. It's still not perfect but it was doing my nut in so I drew a line under it and thought that's as good as it's gonna get

      Hope you and yours are well

      Craig