Comments : EmberAsIdore

  • 1 month ago

    by ddavidd

    "passion glows in embers"
    I might be wrong but your poems all smell like the fresh heart a working man.

    • 1 month ago

      by CJ Maleney

      It's a simple write. I burned some old wood and although the flames did entice I was not captivated.

      As the fire died I looked into the pit and as I got nearer the heat was more intense.

      Never be afraid of the fire! it's what it leaves in its wake that should cause fear

      There is more heat in the embers!