This is so rich I have to ponder a little. It sounds so modern it is hard to wrap your mind around it: "a triumph of imperceptibility" Yet " a subtle combination of concept and image"

Powerful ending, Love it:: " the union of luminosity and obscurity,
on the edge of appearing and disappearing."

Ohh...so indepth it just makes me to pick it out bit by bit and working around this write! Keep penning..