Poem with Sis (Limerick)

by ted_thepoet   May 22, 2021


I wanted to write a poem with sis,
but she told me she was sick as this.
She told me that she needed pills,
but it turns out she wasn't really ill.
She wanted my poem plans to go amiss.

I tried :/
It's not my best limerick. The original version was "bro" but I don't have a brother.

-pandasister4

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  • 2 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Trying is so fun to do
    Especially with your brother who
    Isn't really there
    But who on earth cares?
    Your sister really annoys you.

    Sorry, I couldn't help myself. I'm rubbish at limericks, but as the first line states 'trying is so fun to do'. It may sound a little clichéd, but it's true.
    Very good:)

  • 2 years ago

    by Everlasting

    i read a limerick today
    where Pandasister4 wanted to say
    that her imaginary bro was fun
    unlike her sis, he is full of puns
    I think I like to read about him okay?

    • 2 years ago

      by ted_thepoet

      Wow noice limerick ;).

      I have a sister who annoys me.
      But if she could stop then I'd be cheering with glee.
      I've tried taunting and daunting but it doesn't work.
      But when I did the taunting, I might've sawn a perk.
      She was gullible, that was her weakness and it just might help, guaranteed.

      I'm not very good with limericks but I tried.