Comments : A Foreseen Disaster

  • 4 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Sometimes a look in the eyes say more than words can say.

    • 4 years ago

      by Star

      Yes!!!!! Thanks for reading ^_*

  • 4 years ago

    by prasanna

    Eyes are truly a gateway into one's soul. Consider maybe adding in 'as' before "I/for the..." to help with the flow?

    • 4 years ago

      by Star

      I will consider that, thanks :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This actually works reading it back to front, too.
    Excellent

    • 4 years ago

      by Star

      That wasnt intentional, thank you :)