Comments : Leaving The Past

  • 4 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    It's funny how every second brings us further away from what was the 'now'. I liked this, it made me think! Welcome to poems and quotes :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Katrynn

    This poem was inspired by The Giver by Lois Lowry

  • 4 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    With each tick society moves around its clock, ordered and safe, but what if a tick wants to tock? Off, off, off, with that tock for it needs to tick not tock!

    Sorry for my ramblings. I like your poem based on Jonas's story. Nice work!

    • 4 years ago

      by Katrynn

      Not rambling at all! I liked this perspective :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Nice rhythm.

    • 4 years ago

      by Katrynn

      I was hoping someone would point this out!
      I was trying to keep a steady pace, like a steady tick tick ticking rhythm and I'm super glad someone noticed! :)
      -Katrynn

  • 4 years ago

    by Em

    Time, it stands still for no one unfortunately and after a while we're all going to meet our end.. Sad but true. Nice rhythm x

  • 4 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Congratulations on your first win!:)