Comments : Something about my heart

  • 1 year ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Great to read another piece of yours! I love the passion in this, the realization that there is something almost like phenomena that happens when you are with him, that can't easily be explained, and it pulls you in and brings you peace at the same time. Helps you find "you".

    "We talked till the rhythm
    in my chest became a thunderstorm."

    I can't get over how beautiful this verse is! Well done :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    Passionately penned and from start to end it just drew me into your world..lovely!

    Congrats on the Win!