Comments : Wilted Flowers

  • 2 years ago

    by Kate

    This is a fictional piece.

  • 2 years ago

    by Walter

    A sad but beautiful write

  • 2 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I know you mentioned this is a fictional piece, and I also know I never questioned the authentic emotion in it. You wrote this well - with the "matter of fact" of what you're expected to do next, and the meaning of a simple flower arrangement. This is one of those pieces that really show how powerful memories are, how tangible they can become, and how unpredictable and cruel life can be, and we somehow have to just keep going.

    • 2 years ago

      by Kate

      Thank you. There’s a bit of my real, raw emotion in there just masquerading as something else. I’m happy it feels authentic.