Comments : (Will We) Haunt Together

  • 2 years ago

    by RavenBunny

    I truly enjoy and love this. It's a unique and delightful read. I've read this about 3 times now and each read leaves me wanting more with this.

    Love it.

    • 2 years ago

      by Kate

      Thank you :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    The first thing that came to my mind after reading this and your other recent ones is that you're versatile as a writer. From a rhyming piece to a shorter piece like this, I always enjoy reading what you share! I like the idea of haunting together, the question, the reaching out and wondering if this soul will search for you too. Also, the last line is sort of relatable, if this makes sense. How some people fear death, while others have different perspectives on it, whether that's feeling like it will be their end, or that they will be reincarnated... there's so many angles and emotions to feel about it. The idea here from this poem is one of wanting to be, even in the unknown, the in-between as you mention, not separated. It reminded me of lost souls who are wanting some peace of mind, and how easily that can be exploited versus other people wanting to help them pass on. What will become of us, and what will our haunting mean, what will it look like?

    Love the tone in this.