Comments : Question

  • 2 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Awww...that is so sweet and heartfelt! I guess when you've come a full circle in life your heart and mind knows what and who about life and love...nice read.

    "Have our ever broken this bond"
    ^^I think its a typo, should it be have you ever..?

    • 2 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thanks I noticed it just after I posted it but it was really late so figured I'd correct it this morning x

  • 2 years ago

    by Walter

    This rhymes and flows flawlessly and I especially like your ending lines. Glad to see it nominated...well done!