Comments : April 5th 2022

  • 2 months ago

    by Everlasting

    Nystagmus came to mind when I read the first paragraph. Particularly the one caused by Vit B1 deficiency or double vision and involuntary eye movement can be some of the symptoms but anyways, lol been reading lots

    I’m not saying that’s what this someone is experiencing but just sharing what popped to mind as I read.

    I like the ending. I also like the second stanza. Can relate sometimes not always but sometimes.

    • 2 months ago

      by Star

      I was actually going to the feeling of something like that ^_^
      Thank you Luce!!!

  • 2 months ago

    by mistake

    The last 2 lines really hit me personally. Everyone can see the same exact thing differently. Our minds, if we’re not careful, can go into a spiral of the myriad of ways ours actions could be perceived. Good read, thank you.

    • 2 months ago

      by Star

      Thank you for reading :)