Saw you from the outside

by Pj   Jan 21, 2023


I don't wanna chat about us anymore
My feelings changed the day i walked away
I'd had enough of your ways
making me feel i had no self worth
Well done you
You had your way
Making me feel i can't live without you
I died over and over again inside
I cried all the tears from my eyes
What was it all for?
I'm so glad i awoke inside and saw you from the outside

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  • 2 years ago

    by Ink

    Very strong write, I think many people can relate to it, I particularly liked the opening line, completely sets the tone of the poem. Regards Ink

  • 2 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    writing this poem must have been cathartic for you for sure. Often being in a relationship is literally being 'inside' and it's only when you escape, or are forced to that you see it from a different perspective. So revealing, right!

    Thanks for sharing.

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