I agree Shoshana. I enjoy reading your poems Tony.

wow.. really good! very touching! 5/5

5/5 thats a great poem...

!ME!

This is a really good poem...i like it!

Aww this poem almost made me cry

It seemed like you were forcing the poem to rhyme. I would have writtin this poem free verse. It has a really good message and I think it is a good poem...but PERSONALLY I think it has a little work...it could be very very good though

keep it up :)

~ren~

Very good

timehealsallwounds*

This is a moving poem! i'll enjoy reading more of yours! * bre bre *

Oooh. I haven't seen a poem with
A
A
B
B

Format in a long time, and haven't commented on those poems in an even longer time!

Wow, for three stanzas this poem was really short and good, maybe you should think of making a counter-part to it, I don't know, it's really good. A few suggestions I could make is use proper grammer, like capitalizing your I's and capitalizing letters at the beginning of sentences, and using commas.

Nice write.

Good poem keep it up 5/5

I know what u mean..it was a great poem w/o a doubt keep writing!