Comments : Right

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashmore

    I agree Shoshana. I enjoy reading your poems Tony.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    wow.. really good! very touching! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    5/5 thats a great poem...

    !ME!

  • 17 years ago

    by jenelle

    This is a really good poem...i like it!

  • 17 years ago

    by blah nbanned sux

    Aww this poem almost made me cry

  • 17 years ago

    by Ren

    It seemed like you were forcing the poem to rhyme. I would have writtin this poem free verse. It has a really good message and I think it is a good poem...but PERSONALLY I think it has a little work...it could be very very good though

    keep it up :)

    ~ren~

  • 17 years ago

    by timehealsallwounds6

    Very good

    timehealsallwounds*

  • 17 years ago

    by briana

    This is a moving poem! i'll enjoy reading more of yours! * bre bre *

  • 17 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    Oooh. I haven't seen a poem with
    A
    A
    B
    B

    Format in a long time, and haven't commented on those poems in an even longer time!

    Wow, for three stanzas this poem was really short and good, maybe you should think of making a counter-part to it, I don't know, it's really good. A few suggestions I could make is use proper grammer, like capitalizing your I's and capitalizing letters at the beginning of sentences, and using commas.

    Nice write.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley Ann

    Good poem keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    I know what u mean..it was a great poem w/o a doubt keep writing!