A nicely penned Quatern! Liked the read and the easy flow and smoothness of one verse leading into the other. Good job!

I can't remember the last time I read a Quatern; this was beautiful! Also, love the inclusion of "onyx". It's not a word I hear often but it's a great color descriptor and always sounds so poetic. Love the intimacy of this shared bond between the ravens, in singing and dancing.

Welcome to PnQ by the way! It's fantastic to see new members and I hope you always feel welcome to share whatever you write or post in the forums as well :)