Comments : Along the path...

  • 2 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Love your nature poems! The imagery and emotion interwoven with it is never disappointing.

  • 2 years ago

    by William Mae

    Very beautiful Meena, very soothing to read

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Timothy

    Opened eyes...breathing mouths,
    Light alive by the God-giving sun;
    Small path needed, as all can see the way,
    The darkness has been underrun.

    Ballerinas in fair-color wear,
    Spin in fashion, loving the harmony of the hymn;
    Their frowns turned upside down, with soft padding,
    Just let the relaxed feet enjoy the water, and the swim fins.

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Timothy

    Opened eyes...breathing mouths,
    Light alive by the God-giving sun;
    Small path needed, as all can see the way,
    The darkness has been underrun.

    Ballerinas in fair-color wear,
    Spin in fashion, loving the harmony of the hymn;
    Their frowns turned upside down, with soft padding,
    Just let the relaxed feet enjoy the water, and the swim fins.

    Edit: I did put this on my page too. Can we maybe keep it alive in 2025?