Loves Endless Wave - Sonnet

by Walter   Sep 28, 2023


Our love reminds me of the sea and shore
Where the water and sand will first attract
The moons influence keeps pulling for more
And then allowing these two to react

A potion is mixed and drawn back to sea
Where it is swirled riding high with each wave
Time slowly will settle all the debris
Reacting just like our love first behaved

The foundations will form with this routine
Instinctively sand falls gently below
Although the waves crest is all that is seen
Because the building blocks don't always show

Love's so much more than a wave at high crest
And owes it all to the time we invest

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  • 11 months ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    Perfect! I am in love with this sonnet. Love the flow and the rhymes, good word choices though simple. I love how you started with attraction, and then love building up its foundation, then ending it with those lines, it is not about the heights that the wave of love reaches, but how you make them endless through efforts and time invested. Added to favorites.

    --- MKKK

    • 11 months ago

      by Walter

      Thanks so much MKKK for reading and I really appreciate your comments.