Comments : I Breathe to Break (Sonnet)

  • 6 hours ago

    by Everlasting

    “What’s in a name?”
    Isn’t that what Shakespeare once had said?
    Look at you!! You are writing form poetry
    So cool

    There are many lines I liked but this one caught my attention the most

    For I was born to break what I became

    I don’t know what I was born to became
    But I don’t think anyone really knows

    I mean, just sn example, if both parents are alcoholics, sometimes is assume the child might too. Sometimes that’s not the case. Does that mean that child was born to break what he became? Or what he could become? I guess that line could apply to the child if the child became too an alcoholic but then managed to fix himself.”?