its beautiful....i gave u a 5

hi,...i read your pantoum and then i checked out peters also and i tried writing 1 myself...id be really happy if u cud rate it and tell me how i fared...please read it whenever u get the time...love,megha

Great poem...man im smiling so much right now!!! Keep writing girl!!!
*luvs*
Sierra

Wow Trincy, I like the way you write free form, I am not that BRAVE to try it like that, but you do it well enough for all of us. Timothy r

another great one. great job, do you know what happend to Kristina k. i haven't been on in a while just saw she left. =( well keep it up... loved it. 5 all the way

What a lovely poem Trincy! I love it. I agree with Chris. Keep writing!

Luv, Jess xx

Great poem, Trincy! So loving and romantic! Keep up the good work!

you make me wish i could sit with you without even knowing you. good work.

Beautifully written as ever...loved it!!! :) Michelle

This is a great poem Trincy. I admire your ability to make this free form still flow wonderfully. I also liked the repeating lines. Great job, loved the poem.
~Hannah~

Trincy, that was very good!!! I'm like....wow...great job girl...keep up the good work..wow...sorry can't stop sayin that!!! :)
~angel-711~ ;)

good but the ending again kinda left you hanging oh well good job take care and keep writing