Lonely night

by jn   Jul 19, 2004


As the night grows deep
Loneliness creeps into thy being
Why am I alone ?
The frail heart asked
Will it ever end?
The wounded soul wondered
It might last forever...
The weak mind thought
I don't know...
The inner voice answered

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  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    very nice poem... theonly thing I would change is the last line, I'd make it match the other similar lines: "The inner voice answered".

    this was a very deep, thought-provoking poem, done very well in just a few lines!

  • 19 years ago

    by Outlaw Central

    Thats Very Good jn I really like this its an intrestin 3rd person perspective.
    Check mine out too and Ill check yours out.
    Take care oc

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