I Silently Pray

by Broken   Jul 20, 2004


Walking alone in the dark
Unknown place becoming familiar
Going around in circles
Working my way into the ground

I silently pray to be blessed
With the curse of death
So maybe I can find my light
Maybe the pain will be put to rest

As my life crumbles beneath me
I feel the cold breath of grim
Brush against my tear-stained cheeks
Soon my tainted soul will see again

As he leads me down the burning path
His hand slowly reaches for mine
I go limp as my body fails to work
My knees buckle and I fall

My breath goes shallow
And my heart slows it's beating
No use to fight, I'm already dying
This loneliness gently lifts

My prayer was answered
So dead and soulless I lay
Grim still leading my soul
Taking me to my final grave

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  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    deep poem...i love it!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    whoa! this is amazing!!! such creativity and omg...lol it was liek magic o.o lol sorry, i think this is beautiful, hte best i've read so far, i have to read all ur work!
    -Mortalidaga
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  • Good naration. Even though it was pretty wiered. Your poems have different subjects and you have presented it differently. Looks interesting. :) Trincy.