My Ten Commandments

by Deaths Maiden   Jul 23, 2004


1. Do not kiss me if I'm never going to be loved.

2. Do not hug me if your never going to comfort me again.

3. Do not take me by the hand if your not willing to show me the way.

4. Do not open your mouth to speak if only words of pain are going to escape your lips, only do so if you are willing to give me advice.

5. Do not talk behind my back if you want to gain my trust.

6. Do not ever make promises you cannot keep.

7. Do not befriend me if your gonna leave me me later on.

8. Do not say you'll be there for me if you won't be.

9. Do not lead me on with false hope if all hope is lost.

10. Do not tell me to believe if there is nothing left to believe in.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    This list seemed very heart felt to me, and I can agree with all 10 of them. Awesome job. Kudos

  • 19 years ago

    by julie

    excellent, i have one kinda like that, about the 7 commandments, but beautifully put!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    Every womens thoughts

  • 19 years ago

    by Karlton Earl Freeman

    Good.