Fallen

by rachyBBY   Jul 26, 2004


How can I look straight into your face,
And hope that these feelings inside will erase?
I'll tell you this once,
And hope you'll let it be,
I know that you're the one for me.
But how can I look into your deep eyes,
And deny these feelings inside?
All I know now is that this must be true,
These feelings I feel so deeply for you.

The one thing that I should get off my chest,
Is that when I'm with you,
I feel so spontaneous
It's almost like..
Oh, nevermind.

Your smile makes me feel so good inside,
And your kisses give me weak knees
I really think I've fallen,
For the man of my dreams.
So while I'm letting everything out in the open..

I think this is where I've over spoken.
I can't deny these feelings that I know are so true
I've fallen..fallen in love with you.

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  • 19 years ago

    by rachyBBY

    I don't think there's anything wrong with the end. It's saying that some person has fallen in love with another..what's wrong with that?

  • 19 years ago

    by Christina

    This was an ok poem until the end! i believe endings are what make poems GREAT! this was pretty good.