5/5 all the way babe just keep it up i hope to read more of what you write....

Aww this reminds me of some of the things my ex boyfriend said even though i love him with all my heart he really never sees that anymore but this was a really great person any girl would be lucky to have you luv kal 5/5

I love this poem, it is so true, without those things... guy are quite boring... well anyways ... great job. i loved it

Hi Cox, i really liked this piece a lot. It displays the love and care that a woman dreams of. beautifully written!

Omg thats so sweet, my best part was the end, when it finished.....haha

I love this!!! sooo sweet awww

ashleigh

VERY GOOD!

ii LOVE iiT.

Ohh this is soo sweet.. i have seen it in so many other words though.. all through myspace... and emaisl.. and yeaa.. it is an every girl wants desire.. it is good! Good job =]

Hey good job.... thanks for the dedicatiom!!

love it ....
good job

Man this is da most SWEETEST poewm a guy could ever, and I mean EVER write for a girl!!! Its wonderful n beautiful!!! 10/10

Ur just being a cheeky boi ayy lool
good poem=]

Breath taking nice work

Breath taking nice work