My brother

by Bibbitt CSI537   Jul 29, 2004


I wrote this for my big brother, its a true story/poem

my brother has a girlfriend
he even has a kid
but both of them cant help him
for everything he did

my mother always told me
"the decisions that you make,
and every single choice of yours,
could end up a mistake!

the choice my brother made
i believe the worst of all
was getting to involved
with drugs and alcohol!

he's not aloud to see his kid
for way to long a while
i just don't think its right
that he cant see his child!

he's not aloud to see her
not even on holidays
i really think thats wrong
in just so many ways!

i know my brother makes mistakes
that aren't so very smart
but no matter what he does
he'll always be in my heart!(love ya Tom!)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rosie

    :) i like it. well done. Rosie xXx

  • 19 years ago

    by MAYBE TOMORROW

    i thought it was good keep up the good work :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Bibbitt CSI537

    dont like it. well its not about you is it?