Comments : I lost you

  • 19 years ago

    by amber

    AWW! i like this poem a lot! It must mean so much to you! Its really sad....I'm also very sorry

  • 19 years ago

    by Marta

    That was sooo sad.. It's a tragedy to loose someone you love, I know. Well take it easy and I gave you a 5. It was written very good. Just beautiful, nicely done. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Hey I liked this poem. It is supposed to be "were" not "where" on the first line of the poem. I think that this poem can be improved though. You can speak a bit more about your feelings, and the whole car incident. I know this is a personally meaningful topic, so if you decide not to change the poem, that is fine.

  • 19 years ago

    by Angie Lopez

    I really loved this poem it was so sad and it made me cry. I know you'll never forget this but I really hope that one day life will get better.

  • 19 years ago

    by Brittany

    hey i loved this one. its really sad and i am sorry this happened. i know what it's like to lose somone u love.. its not easy!
    love britt

  • 19 years ago

    by Kelsey

    This was my favorite poem of yours! I loved it! keep it up!!

  • 19 years ago

    by heather

    gr8 job and i am sorry 4 ur loss i am 4 ever ur friend and when ever u need one i am here g2g luv heather