TAKE A BOW!

Great poem, it was so well worded, I loved it. Your really talented. Keep writing.
Love,

-Blue

wow... just wow. that really blew me off my feet. i really can't explain how it made me feel exactly. that was so powerful and deep. it was beautifully written, it was just beautiful. i'm not sure what else to say, lol. Excellent job, keep it up!

Wery Kewl...i must say...keep it up!

It was definitely a good poem. The rhythm and rhyme were excellent. All I can critique is that although you gave plenty of the sad deaths in life (as this is supposed to be a sad poem) you ended on a nearly happy note without extrapolating on the happy side of things.

you're right....this IS really deep...i think it's made a lot of people think about how they want to live their lives from now on

Great writing... very sad poem, fill with image of death... it made me think... errr... Im still thinking :D... anyway, keep up the good work :)

very well written ur a great poet keep writting

Wow...beautifully written with such a strong message!!!

wow...i am speechless