ABCB style is the rhyme scheme...meaning that in most of my poems there are 4 line stanzas which usually have the 2nd line and 4th line rhyming and not the other two...
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wow, thats really good, loved the technique, definatley worked in my opinion!

That was a good one. The rhymying scheme was a great idea. (Can we call it a "Palindrome Rhyme"?) Good poem.

OMGGGG........Its damn coooooooooooool.....dashin...i must say!

You made it work.
and I hate this wait-3-min-to-vote-thing.. but you are worth the wait. :)

I've never seen that scheme before, but it was good! Great job!

You did a pretty good job with your new scheme, but you sort of made a few mistakes. A and D rhyme with each other, so your poem is sorta a....
A B C A E F G H I H G F E A C B A
which certainly is interesting enough... lol good work.

*sticks tongue out at Sean Allen* Thanks for noticing...but the same difference!!!!! LoL!!!

hehe, cool poem, very interesting scheme, I do prefer the normal ABCB scheme tho... not too creative am I :P either way, that was a great poem, and its very neat of you to try out new rhyme schemes :) keep it up :D

hey biotch whats up! havent talked to you in a while! and yes ur rhyme scheme is good!

well for trying sumtin different u sure did a dam good job!!!! lol brilliant poem!! >>5/5<<
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