Comments : A Heart Of Paper

  • 16 years ago

    by xInsignificantx

    wow i really liked this poem! it was really good...please if you dont mind come and tell me what you think of some of my poems...thanks a lot and keep writing you are really good!

  • 16 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    gotta agree with lucifer awesome it as asolutely awesome

  • 16 years ago

    by Rebekah

    Well done 8-) Keep writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Daniel Ward

    wow, i aktually envisioned the whole thing. great writing

  • 16 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    I love this poem a lot....i really love it...

    ps: Could u plz ceck out my poem "The nightmare chamber" it would really mean a lot if u could check it out...thanx--taintedvirtues

  • 13 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Another well written poem from you.... i like this one.

    the rhyme scheme was great and it flowed nicely.

    good job.5/5

  • 3 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I just came accross this little gem and had to add it to my favourites. Great rhyming and pace. I really love the paper theme that runs throughout. It portrays the fragility of it all. This is compelling, emotional and dynamic and is an an immediate favourite. Well done on an excellent piece. Milly x

  • 2 months ago

    by Lost star

    Beautiful structured poem, wonderfully written.