Forgive and get forgot
by Ben Aug 5, 2004
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After all we've been through, I still sit here loving you,you forgot me after i forgave you, This empienessis consumong me, confusing me, forgive and get forgot, cause nothing materes now its all lost, The pictures of you on my wall, don't seem to smile anymore, your glowing eyes have stopped shinning forever more, forgive and get forgot . . . forever more |
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19 years ago
by Ben
Thanx all
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19 years ago
i liek this poem ben :) its really godo, but you made a few spellign mistakes o.o lol :) its really good, your a fantastic writer, keep it up. :)
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19 years ago
by Sean Allen
Whoops I guess she pressed the submit button a few too many times. Anyway, I liked the poem, and I can sorta see why you would keep in all jumbled together, like maybe to make it seem hasty and complicated. I think you should fix the spelling errors though.
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19 years ago
by Alexa Bee
I like ur poem its very true and yet in away not so.. i thought it was very nice good job
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19 years ago
by Alexa Bee
I like ur poem its very true and yet in away not so.. i thought it was very nice good job
